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Open Poetry #14

where i belong

crazymary
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 14
nebraska

0 posted 2001-06-04 08:20 PM

It's funny
How the mere sight of him
Brings a smile to my face
My eyes light up
My heart skips a beat
I try not to faint
He turns his head
And I catch his eye
I inhale deeply
And let out a sigh
He walks towards me
My mind is a blur
I don't know what to say
I'm scared, unsure
But as soon as he speaks
The feeling is gone
Because when I'm with him
That's where I belong

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-05 12:06 PM

This is sweet, and simple, and TRUE. smile to crazymary from the oh-so-sane-serenity!

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-05 01:52 AM

very tender, very sweet..thank you for a walk back in time for me...gentle smile

Just A Man
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 15
Pain

3 posted 2001-06-05 02:02 AM

How fortunate for you. There is a place that you belong. Some of us have forgotten what a home in someone elses arms is.

Be happy

"In daring to dream, offering life,I am sentenced to life as a Deadman walking. Such ends all Love given."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-06-06 07:43 AM

Woohooo! love it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-06 02:33 AM

crazymary-
   this is such a sweet and tender write..
   i enjoyed it much..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Ann
Member

since 2000-07-07

Posts 64
Australia

6 posted 2001-07-06 02:41 AM

hi, this was a wonderfully sweet poem

you made me remember my old higschool crushes hehe..hope your special guy knows what he's got! best wishes,

~ANN~

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