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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-06-04 03:39 PM

Sitting here with her head affixed in the direction of the sun,
how she longs for the waves of the wind on her cheek.
Reaching now,
the princess finds her Guardian again,
and smiles..
and smiles..
This is simplicity,
that needs no pondering.
and she reaches for the Guardian,
resting her cheek in his knowing hands.
The elder sir sits and asks nothing,
but for her to comfort her heart,
near a fire that does not need to consume,
in order to keep burning.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

1 posted 2001-06-04 03:46 PM

Oh my,
I liked this, alot of interesting possibilities here

Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2001-06-04 05:43 PM

"but for her to comfort her heart,
near a fire that does not need to consume,
in order to keep burning."

Don't we all need such a fire that keeps us warm but doesn't consume us....

I loved it..........

Thank you
*******************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-06-04 05:49 PM

I enjoyed reading about the "Guardian" very, very much. It had a neat feel to it, the entire piece.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-04 08:08 PM

we all need that Guardian. . . every day. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-06-04 09:55 PM

gentle smile, the simplest words flow with the breeze that caresses...you reach deep within, gentle maid, and I see a smile..very nicely done

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-05 04:20 AM

What a beautifully soothing poem Jenn, I loved this one, so comforting.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

deepblue
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 17

7 posted 2001-06-05 06:56 PM

ah, a familiar fire

well done

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-05 06:59 PM

I like this. Very nicely expressed.

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