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Now I Think
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Now I Think |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now I think I'm going to die How easy in exhale of sigh Now I think I will begin How easy is the yearn of sin? Now I think where no thought grew Now I think-- I dream of you. Now I think I think again my journey to hold you again. Now I think. Now, I die. a funeral of wonder's why... and all the answers laugh in stink--- Now, I love you. Now. I think. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AAAhhhhhh girl...ya went and did it again...wrote my heart out here for everyone to see... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Serenity, I'm at a loss. Can I just say that I LOVE IT and leave it at that? NO? OK, No problem... I LOVE IT A LOT!  ~Sheri |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity sweetie, great write...loved it. Missed your writings ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...a funeral of wonder's why..." what a line! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ Your poetry is just the coolest.....I love reading your words....YOU ROCK!!  SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
 ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think maybe you are thinking too much today *s..huggz just teasing ya ~Wynter sometimes you can overload on thoughts though  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i think i like it i think i love it i think you better not go and die too soon because i think your writing's getting better and better and we want MORE and i think it's cool to be in love, eh? hehe where ya been???? how was the concert!? |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I just think...... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Slicker |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
now,now,now... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
a funeral of wonder's why... great line. Enjoyed! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"and all the answers laugh in stink",...you lady, kill me. How do you put out such stabbing, pricking, poking words? That's what they do to me sometimes. Sorry.  . It's just as if they stick me in the sides and seep into my flesh. Thank you for always providing me with such things to read. Sweet and swirling K. *Peace you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thinking is like sipping wine, too much and your out of this world. Enjoyed the read. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Awesome write!!! The end was perfect. All writing comes |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
????????? but then, why ask why . . . just enjoy the fly . . . /:-}== |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula, methinks you show your heart perfectly well without my help! HUGSIrie? Good to see you here! Thanks for stopping in to read. muchly appreciated. tracie! have missed you as well! Thanks to you too! Kari...not so sure where that line came from...lol, sometimes I'm not sure if I'm writing the poems or if they are writing ME! SEA..you're just the sweetest thing, I thank you much! Sven? ------------------------------! wynter...everyday, I think too much, I know it's hard to tell sometimes, but true...sigh. Thanks and hugs. doreen...love is hell. and the concert was fine, just a little trouble with some very insecure security staff...  Will fill ya in later! bernie? I recommend small doses! JLR, I thank you for reading! Michael...now, now, and later too! Thank you!Spitfire, you always make me feel better. And sorry about the stabbing thing--it just seems to come out that way. I wish I knew how to write pretty more often. Or, at least that I would be inspired to try. Thanks, though, it's nice when someone understands! Sy...no doubt about that! and too much thinking DOES complicate things, doesn't it? LW...a perfect ending is what I pray for! Thanks you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed! e/K...? indeed. I just keep trying to figure it out! you sneaked past me there but had to come back to say thanks! Thanks all, and I'm tired. Hopefully I can sneak a few hours in past this crazy brain sprain of mine! Love to all. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow..I like this..I have been away for a while but I am glad I came back in time to see this....great work!!! Julie Julie :) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seren...when the poem writes you, it is a very good fit, indeed.... lead on.... |
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