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Open Poetry #13

The moment

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-07 12:52 PM

In a moment I am lost
in your eyes
in a second
I am lost in dream

For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time

Where there is only
you and me
dancing for ever
in eternity

As a star beam
catches your eye
on this
this starry night.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-04-07 12:54 PM

serene on this night i see no stars but love your poem so

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

2 posted 2001-04-07 12:55 PM

Lost in someone's eyes...how dreamy...
Marie~

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-07 01:34 AM

Thank you!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-07 09:32 AM

Brad, this little write likes me, very much so! Thank you!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-04-07 10:58 AM

Lovely, truly! And the closing line sent my mind into Van Gogh's Starry Night, what a heavenly place for two lovers to be.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-07 11:23 AM

BradMajors~
Nicely portrayed ...

'For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time'

To get lost in the doorway of mesmerize of comely eyes
...very dreamingly said.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-04-07 01:15 PM

*SIGH* beautifully done!

SEA

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