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Aries the Ram - Creed "yes I am"
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Aries the Ram - Creed "yes I am" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I am re-posting this from twelve because I couldn't get the format right, and this gives me a second chance. All honesty to quick, wit could be caustic Rapid of temper, will be a team member In all things demure, a heart that is pure Eternal in aspire and meets their desire Self moving in creed in word and in deed The impulse to try but questions asks why Held by sign of fire, but not in funeral pyre Exceptional yes! Can work under duress Results aiming so high doesn't trust the I All wise as Athena could live at a marina More dynamic in charm cannot do harm Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It still won't do what I want so I'm giving up. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well ya can give up on the format... but not the way cool poem... you have decribed the Aries nature well... I have a sis and brother who are Aries ... and there are over 12 family birthdays in April... a whole lotta Rams around here  well done groovy girl. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Wow! Clever poetic ode to Aries~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Aries . . . YES !!! You must be an early spring/fall babe, no? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Do ME!!! DO ME !!!!!!!!!  can you guess what I am? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, this is not my sign I just do them for the fun of it. As for a fall baby... I am... I fell off the back of a coal truck. My mother fainted in the street a coal truck was coming by and as my mother had gone into labour they kindly gave my mother a lift to the hospital. Paula, I think you are a Gemini. Only one more sign until I reach yours. Hopefully by that time I'll get this font thing under control. Be real and feel Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured this sign well Kethry ... I know of few who match this perfectly, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Kit, just a little series that wont let go. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is great, Keth... I'd be a Gemini as well.. and I'll be watching...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see ya got it too work....very cool Keth an acrostic with same line rhyme ... yeppers..way cool oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Kethry, Yes I am... Aries, that's right... great that you did a re-post, else I would have missed a gem... Regards, Sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, thanks so much for the repair job, you're a marvel, and a marvellous person. Janet, it wasn't me  but thanks for stopping by again.Sudhir, I guessed you would be an Aries, some of my favourite people have been born under that sign. Be real and feel Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Had to come back to see if you got it fixed. Nice visual touch. Love the internal rhyme too. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like how it looks here. Very well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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