Open Poetry #13 |
Mirrored...Cinquains |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Mirrored (Cinquain round) Mirrored Timeless visions A butterfly in chains Paradise in tears of needing The Key The Key Unlocking all Memories of the night An illusion of love seeps in Always Always The silent cry The heart of pain is heard To be adored, filling the void Of Hurt Of Hurt When love meets death Another casualty Broken promises bound in tears Replaced Replaced A throw away Another side of you Dancing among imagined dreams It Rains It Rains Lost evermore Hope, within mind's portal For the sound of dance disappears Mirrored ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW. Mirrored/linked cinquains. Well done! More! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Interloper, I love the challenge of structured poetry..*s ~Wynter/Maureen * I think if you can learn to do that you can learn to write free verse with more meaning..just my opinion "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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