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No Strings Attached... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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No ~Strings~ Attached Have no idea why I chose the above Just heard it, liked it and so Thought it would make an interesting name But for a poem, about what, I don't know. These last few days, rough, by all accounts And I haven't handled them well. Been moody and tense, tearful and a crab Cancer is my sign, must tell. So decided this evening, to just settle back, Bathe in bubbles, pleasant thoughts and dreams. Then closed my eyes, felt the mind's eye touch ~~Sighing, so real it all seems. I heard your ~whisper in the heated air Felt your breath upon my skin. Could sense the nearness of your face As your ~smile~ just brushed my chin. When your lips had sought to comfort mine As they warmed and gently pressed. The thrill that sent me spiraling then Was "desire", I must confess. It's You, I look for in my dreams Both day and night time, too. My thoughts, my moves, my words, my breath Are controlled, by what you do. No strings attached, is appropriate now It fits here, like a glove. For always, in these mind's eye dreams What is real, is not real love. But warmth and just a little touch Of calm and peace it brings To have these feelings of needing you And of words you sometimes sing. So very ~~softly smiling now Am I, when holding thoughts Of you, and all you mean to me In my heart, where you're now caught. M...just an old memory 7.13.99 "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"I heard your ~whisper in the heated air Felt your breath upon my skin. Could sense the nearness of your face As your ~smile~ just brushed my chin." Sensual sounding, I could almost feel him! Excellent! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your poem is lovely. Especially the well crafted fourth verse. By the way we have the same sign. Joyce |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
But warmth and just a little touch Of calm and peace it brings To have these feelings of needing you And of words you sometimes sing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well Done! I have a feeling you hear that song often. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
These words are as beautiful as the thought of you taking a bubble bath, Wynter  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
inot2B was meant to be sensual...from my Moonchild days..some say I wrote better then. *s thank you Joyce Johnson I am glad you like that verse...Oh a June birthday? Well then you know that moods wax and wane with the fullness of the moon Interloper Thank you, happy to have you read me  And no I never hear that song often enough Balladeer Thank you, too...well thoughts are often deceiving... I searched this old one just for you *s oOoo~~Just Right For Two~~ooOo \ Lying back \ ( surrounded here ) oOooOoOoOOOoooOOOooOoOo oOo..bubbles bubbles...OoO OoOooo..everywhere..ooOoOOoO OOooOOoooOOooOoooOOOOOooOo Thinking of Dreaming, too Wondering what He would do If he Could Would he then? Could he, Would he Want to spend Moments in This tub for two Would he, Should he I'm asking you? Thoughts escaping Sighhhhinggggg now Would I like that? hmmmmmmmm AND HOW! Another day dreaming here Sighing, sighing, Everywhere~~~~ M/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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