Open Poetry #13 |
White Feather, A Flute, and the Wind |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
White Feather, A Flute, and the Wind White Feather, slim of limb holds her Flute toward the Sun in and out threads the Wind all listen to your chant a calling to the bird on wing a tear to allow the flower's growth the spirits hold to her keeping all listen to your chant White Feather, woman good handle the flute as you would let the Wind be your breath all listen to your chant Sun may come, Sun may go but never shall the Wind not blow hold your flute, lift song on high all listen to your chant White Feather, slim of limb a tear to allow the flower's growth let the Wind be your breath all listen to your chant |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
WooHoo.... The echoes resound!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
White Feather, woman good handle the flute as you would let the Wind be your breath all listen to your chant Sun may come, Sun may go but never shall the Wind not blow hold your flute, lift song on high all listen to your chant ================= Oh yes....this is a gift of inspire whispered in the wind to your pen by the spirits and muses of a higher power... very well done Poetess Sun. Both White Feather and Sun have been done justice oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Enchantment of the chant let not your heart deny~ Upon the Spirited wings of heartfelt response they fly~ Reaching you in this moment from visions of the past~ Draw the ink into your pen give them breath to last~ ~*Willow White Feather*~ bending with the will of phrases flowing from your quill~ *My friend, my friend ... again, there are Spirits Walking~ Peace and love imparted~ I love ya', gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Sunshine, this brought to mind images of a Sundance Ritual gathering. Don't know why, it just did? Feeling the Sun, Hearing her Flute, You took me there. Thanks. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is so visual........beautifully done! SEA |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
great images with carefully chosen words i enjoyed the feel of this one, Sunshine oh, and thanks for the card! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I love your nature inspired poems. It really makes me feel....alive. |
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