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Open Poetry #13

Senryu of Love

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-06 03:57 PM

Lithesome ladies lounge
Levitating lovesongs lilt
Loving languidly

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-06 04:01 PM

I swear, I wish I could do this like you do!

Awesome!!

SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-06 04:19 PM

Wonderful alliteration within this, excellent, my friend!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Destiny Nicole
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since 2001-04-04

Posts 19
USA

3 posted 2001-04-06 08:25 PM

Excellent work! Very inspiring to those who don't exactly know how to use words like these. Thank you I liked it.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-04-06 10:40 PM

My turn again...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
pretty perigrines
petite, peripatetics
purveying poems
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-06 10:42 PM

You sure do have a talent for these, Sunshine!! Very nice.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2001-04-06 10:49 PM

lovely little lament, lithesome lady

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2001-04-07 12:24 PM

I think I'll just say "Mmmmm"

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-07 03:02 PM

Karilea~
Just too lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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