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Remembrance
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Remembrance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Remembrance I knocked upon a silent door, My head bowed down and eyes afloor. A rose half cast, my hat half mast, Wished this moment gone and past. The door opened, I saw old shoes, Baggy pants and a stern amuse. I wish to see Kate I stuttered And smiled through out the mutter. Well now, what have we here? Said a bold voice quite loud and clear. You wish to see my daughter Kate? And I melted, when he said wait. Kate came out in an impish soar, Pulled me in and closed the door, Took the rose, my hat and coat And said you're late, you silly dolt. She took my hand my heart went wild She felt it shake and only smiled I don't know why but I could see She was the only girl for me. It was so then and is so now, Before the oath, before the vow I never knew the why or where, I only knew that she was there. And we live in this house today, And Kate still has her impish way. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Big, big, big smiles.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is so extremely delightful!!! Me thinks you both be a bit impish.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that is so beautiful..and the way it should be...the way I always thought it would be. You write so well... ~Wynter/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Bravo..I love a poem of True Love :-) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You welcome. *L* Vas, Delighted you liked it. Nakd, Thank you sweet. Kitkat, Thank you for the bravo. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhhh yes... the rose of your suppose inspires you higher ...  love this one sweet Sy. *WW* |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Enjoyed....brought back special memories of my own. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, All imagination, winkiewinkie winkiewinkie winkiewinkie. Jill,, Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Loved this, Seymour! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What a vivid imagination you possess - you bring us all to the doorway of your verse and invite us in to enjoy ! ... and we DO ! Thank you, dear poet !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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