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Open Poetry #13

Before You Lose Me.

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-06 01:20 AM

Before You Lose Me.

Striking deep into my heart
The depths of pain surmounts
I stood alone reason lost
Fear encompassing the beyond

Seeking healing of tormented soul
The driving rain of sorrow
Leaving emptiness and no tomorrow
Each step seeking to hear another call

As the shower of rose petals
Strike on my casket
And the life I lived comes to rest
Remember that I was always there

For when you walk away
Seeking answers and comfort
Memories of plenty will make way
Into your life, telling you gently
That whatever pain I put you through
Our lives together was like a rainbow
With each colour telling a tale of love
A story of love that is in eternity's forever
High in Heaven where angels recite with joy
How the two of us lived till death did us part.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-06 02:03 AM

This is stunning, Daniel.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

forevernbluejeans
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 76

2 posted 2001-04-06 02:17 AM

This is not at all what I was expecting...but everything I am looking for...a love that lasts til death comes between us...wonderful

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-04-14 05:56 PM

this is so lovely, it deserves a bump.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2001-04-14 06:11 PM

I agree with Kathleen, this deseerves to be read, take care!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

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