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Open Poetry #13

I can

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-05 04:22 PM

I can kiss you,
from afar.
I can touch you,
with my hands tied.
I can whisper I love you,
to your deaf ears.
I can love you,
even when your not here.
I can seduce,
your shadow.
I can make love,
to your spirit.
And with my love,
I can worship your soul.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 04-05-2001).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-05 04:27 PM

I liked this. Only one question is tie supposed to be tied? Otherwise awesome job!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-05 04:29 PM

Sensual and lovely! You have some great lines in this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-04-05 04:41 PM

I can seduce,
your shadow.
I can make love,
to your spirit.
And with my love,
I can worship your soul.
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Succinct and sensual
so much declared with so few perfect poetic lines
love the "seduce your shadow" line, very cool

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-04-05 05:37 PM

You can and you did. Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-05 07:12 PM

Powerful emotion...powerful words. Love seems to bring out the best in you!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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