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Angel Sanctuary... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Sanctuary  If you fall helpless beneath the winds and rains of sorrow, I will lift you up with wings of glory and be your shelter from the sting of life ~~*~~ If you should find that you are lost all you need to do is turn around and take my hand, I will guide you home to my soul's eden ~~*~~ If your dreams become shattered from your mind, I will kneel beside you to pick the pieces up from the floor and give them hope again ~~*~~ If ever you feel persecuted by the cold, bitter world I shall wash the lonely tears from the hills of your cheeks and remove your crown of thorns so that you shall only know joy ~~*~~ If you become blinded by the shadows of solitude, the glow of my calming light will gently kiss the lashes of your eyes so that you may see that you are not alone, I am here for you ~~*~~ If you long to hear a word that is true, just rest your head upon my breast and listen as my heart serenades ~~*~~ If ever you need me, just breath my name, for, I shall always be your sanctuary your guardian of pure love... I am your angel By Melissa Honeybee  [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
everybody always has such nice pics yuh words got me yuh |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Such a beautiful inspiring piece!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ This is wonderful ... and I smile with joy at the talented pieces you share. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Walt and Brad ~ Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it Margie ~ Big thank you's! I promised you that I would pen "happy" poems  You're the one who inspired me, or at least opened my eyes to the light~[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melis ... this is SOOOO lovely and serene ... written like a beautiful whispered promise I love seeing this side of your poetry!! this one is a sigh and smile It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and its a keeper once I remember to click the box *L* |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully done! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee, in many, many ways, this is a heaven-sent poem....thank you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done ... and nice graphics, too Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, beautiful words so full of hope, perfect graphic too |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wOw! WHAT AN EXQUISITE POEM OF INSPIRATION! yOU DID YOURSELF PROUD, MELISSA!  Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Truly a masterpiece, Melissa. Wonderful writing!! All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
absolutely amazing. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Janet, Walker, Karilea, Interloper, Chels, Cheri, Lone Wolf and Sven - Thank you so much, I enjoyed penning this piece, it's actually a re-write from a poem that I posted about a year ago~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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