Open Poetry #13 |
Moving On |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Moving On I needed you today… long before you were gone, I had called your name, you played a game, pretended not to hear, and like the little boy who cried Wolf, you played the game once too often… I needed you today but your games of the past got in the way of the present, so I swept away the cobwebs in my mind and told myself you were gone, good and gone, and even though I needed you today, I moved on. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh dear poet...this one aches with tears of "if only"....so often by the time the ones that we need see how much we need them...it's much to late...to late to go back and need them all over again. My heart goes to you...through poetry and friendship may you find comfort~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sunshine....Tough love. Sad, yet full of resolve...and taking care of one's self. Thanks for sharing. Bob |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
How unfortunate these games we sometimes play... can't blame ya for steppin' out! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The truly sad part is that no one ever wins in these games. Both parties lose in one way or another. Very sad thoughts, Sunshine. All writing comes |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This says so much about lonliness and loss of friendship...made me feel so sad...sometimes we just have to walk on though. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
We do 'move on' and often it is best we do - with a little 'good fortune' - we can find a new friend - that fills the void left by the old one. still - I confess to knowing the feeling - and it's apparent others do too - as always - you express yourself most beautifully |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
even though I needed you today, I moved on. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Solid ending. Wonderfully presented. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
It is so sad when we are forced to move on. Great piece |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such sadness... such strength... great work, Sunshine! |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
Sunshine - I am trying to move on as we speak.....thanks for the inspiration. |
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