Open Poetry #13 |
Kisses Are Not Always Forever |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kisses Are Not Always Forever I'll never tell anyone how much I miss the beautiful and lovely Michelle. So what if I miss holding her tight and kissing her goodnight. She still has a right to her own life. And she would certainly know if she wanted to see me whenever. And if she did I wouldn't be missing her because we would still be together. And now it doesn't seem right for me to desire to kiss her goodnight while she tends to believe our kisses were never quite right. Sometimes kisses are just a brief romantic endeavor. Kisses are not always forever. Goodnight. LOL. Jameslee@April04,2001 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
No James, sadly, kisses are not forever......at least not all of them....then there are those that linger over years.....the ones that you can't stop feeling.....no matter what you do. SEA |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yep - some of these last and last like Sea says... good poem here... K All obscurity starts with a danger: |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I too, have to agree with Sea. It is sad fact....but those that linger *sighs* |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
They may not be forever...but the touch of them goes on and on...excellent writing JamesMichael~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SBJ .. this is a reads very sincere and with out bitterness... and even though you put lol after it... I think it was intended as sweet confession. a very tender render is how I read it. Your heart always shines in your words. It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very true, James. But the memories go on forever and ever. All writing comes |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
It's strange the way a single kiss can have suh an impact on a person's mind and heart. Beautiful writing... Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
James, this is so sad....I hope you soon find someone willing to give you what you deserve.....kisses that will last forever. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Severn, Kitkat, Butterflies, Janet, Lone, banbury and Jill for your nice responses. I had hope for her kisses, then the kisses began, then the kisses ended, and then all I had was hope again, and now I must let go of the hope and embrace memories...because kisses are not always forever...in this case I had sincerely hoped they were...James |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty awesome i knew a michelle boy did she ever get me in trubble dubble |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree James....a wonderful, heartfelt write! Nathan |
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