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Open Poetry #13

Mistakes

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-04-05 12:11 PM

I've scared you,
haven't I?
forward being I am
when shadows still fall
upon our sunny new morning
merely a pebble, but oh the ripples
how do I correct what I fear to touch?

-R.T.
4/01

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-05 05:32 AM

word choice is excellent on this one....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-04-05 08:17 AM

I like this..says a lot in very few words..

All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-05 08:38 AM

Welcome home Tier - it's been awhile. And I like this!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-04-05 09:19 AM

Thank you Irish Rose, Servern, and Sunshine! *hugs*, it's good to be back. Missed everyone!

*smiles*
-Tier

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