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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2001-04-04 11:45 PM


This walk of life that we take
Is something that we cannot fake.

The ups, the downs the in-betweens,
Trying to walk the life’s straight seams.

Stitching together the edges of the frays,
Not to let in the sun light rays.

Things go right, and things go wrong,
That is where we get the cowboy song.

Trying to be the individual that we can be,
Always costs us some big fee.

Now that you know what is the score,
All I ask you, is to love me ever more.

Bernie

Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2001 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2001-04-05 02:18 AM


You have said a lot here Bernie...its not always an easy walk...and it sure helps to have friends along the way...and hey? You are loved

"If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!"
-Anonymous

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2 posted 2001-04-05 03:18 AM


i think that your words have a really deep meaning and they are very lovely.
thanks for sharing,

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

whiskey
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3 posted 2001-04-29 01:03 AM


Very Strong meaning in your words , we indeed need friends to help us on the journey of life  
Amuse_mi
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4 posted 2001-04-29 01:06 AM


Ahhh some.


latin passion
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5 posted 2001-04-29 01:20 AM


thank you for sharing your poem. LP
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