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Rainy Days |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Been rainy days for years raining hard my crimson tears Wish I could stop the rain make it come another day Haven't seen the sun since your slamming door brought the heavens down If the storm doesn't soon break I know I will surely drown Beneath this rising crimson sea mixed with pain and misery in my last breath I call to thee It been rainy days for years raining hard my crimson tears Won't you please stop the rain? bring my sunshine out again Come back to me and stop the pain please Darling please stop the rain. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Your sunshine will come.Greatly expressed! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This reads like a song! Great writing  SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OKAY! I see Sunshine has already answered your plea. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
ahhhhhhhhh I came across a new one for me. But awwwwwwww it's not at all happy. Let me be your umbrella in this storm. "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I'm glad someone has answered you plea, otherwise I was going to have to transport you to the Pacific NW for the ultimate cure: we have rain like others have snow, and it really is very predictable. I like the idea of crimson tears, and thought that added quite a touch. I enjoyed reading this. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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