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Open Poetry #13

Thrust your love

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-04 02:12 PM

Thrust you love,
in my soul.
Don't deny me,
your touch.
Kiss me softly,
if you will.
Or rough,
if you please.
Only but a minute,
hold my hand.
At your disposal,
I am.
Serve yourself,
my love.
Take me,
have me,
love me,
all.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-04 02:20 PM

What IS on your mind today? I like this one very much. VERY much.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-04 02:20 PM

very well written. I personally wouldn't change a thing!

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-04-04 02:20 PM

Please go a little slower, let me enjoy it some more. Let's not get into such a rush.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-04 03:10 PM

Now let your mind do the walking
And let my body do the talking
Let me show you the world in my eyes

I can't seem to stop replying in Depeche Mode.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-04 04:43 PM

WOW. I hope the intended party hears this once. Came through loud and clear!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-04-04 05:25 PM

Oh Boy!!!!!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-04 07:26 PM

wow. . .just lay it all out there walker!!!

excellent!

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