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Tears I Want To Cry
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Tears I Want To Cry |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tears I Want To Cry Endless nights and lonesome dreams Entrenched memories lost in darkness' gleams Endless days and lonesome walks Entwined happiness lost within solitude's stalks Tears I want to cry are real Tears of love running wild out of control Tears of a heart deeply hurt and wounded Tears seeking warmth long ago dispersed How should I come to love's path How can I regain my senses in the aftermath How must I hide the lost dreams of passion How can I stop the tears without compassion Tears I want to cry are morning's dew Tears of a heart and soul asking for you Tears I must cry to understand true emotion Tears needing your soft hands to bring back reason Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cry the tears, for if you ever teach yourself not to, then you may never be able to again. I love this and know it well. Nice writing.  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Daniel, this is beautiful. Hugs for you. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You ok darlin? Email me...this is so heartfelt Daniel...HUGS!!!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is profoundly beautiful, Daniel. Kathleen Blake |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Temptress, Dee, Paula, and Kathleen, I am fine, just the poet giving some hope to those lost out of love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ Enjoyed the format - and the thoughts. 'How should I come to love's path' ? I think the answer would be, with open heart .... seeking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Third verse really got me...and the last line. I like this a lot. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there will always be hope my friend. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, JLR, and Sven, Thank you for your meaningful replies. Tears need to be shed to understand love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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