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Open Poetry #13

Fairytale Senryu [Two]

Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-04-04 12:36 PM

Fairytale Senryu [Two]

On seafoam beaches
western days of sun and fun
she searched for her Knight

On eastern borders
amid dirt-dry towns, deep down
he wanted love’s light

to cross mountains high
boldly brave both desert and sky
heeding then love’s cry

joined on middle ground
he the Knight of her dreaming
in sun’s light gleaming

his aspirations
seen in green and gold and light
dreaming in the bright

distances traveled
following the dream of life
living for the right

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-04-04 12:39 PM

Lovely too...

regards to you, Karilea,
Sudhir

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-04 02:59 PM

Sunshine, this almost sounds like my errant knight. I loved it.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-04 03:00 PM

A very beautiful piece. I am somewhat unfamiliar with the style but I like it.

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-04-04 04:51 PM

I just love medieval times!! Wonderful . . . sigh . . .

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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5 posted 2001-04-04 06:27 PM

Very, very lovely!

Take care,
Melissa~

SEA

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with you

6 posted 2001-04-04 06:30 PM

I know you know I love this

SEA

Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2001-04-04 07:48 PM

Princess =- let down your hair - the knight cometh = (is there any form you cannot make your own?)

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