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At Bridge Crossing (double Tanka)
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At Bridge Crossing (double Tanka) |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 Between dusk and dawn weather constantly changes bathes mountain with sun delighted I felt such joy all day I wandered the beach How glad I lost me among those colors and reed I swept them aside with my bare hands cattails fell my mind stopped efforts words content to languish Graphics: Ashuelot Bridge, Ashuelot, New Hampshire © John S. Murray Music: midiworld @Robert Finley "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very beautiful piece! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is a gentle, tender read, thank you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OKAY. I enjoyed the read. Keep 'em coming. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved the feel of the cattails falling to ground and could feel them sliding through my hands. You do have a way with words, and I agree with Interloper, keep them coming. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
sounds very peaceful...very nice |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent construction.... yes, sometimes thoughts and words are not necessary...just the feel of being... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is lovely Julian...very well crafted...  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ What lovely structure for such serene images. Greatly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Thank you all for reading and commenting. The piece was filled with piece as was the day. Hopefully, my cyber pen continues its flow. Shalom "I am not now that which I have been." |
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