Open Poetry #13 |
A Healing Place |
Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I'm just sitting here listening to the quiet The breeze is flowing through the newly budded trees Pairs of birds are hunting for a nesting place and a perfect spot to put it In hopes the Spring buds will bring forth a covering of leaves I'm just sitting here enjoying the perfume in the air If bottled the label would read...... ... Spring-times Best I see little creatures scurrying by and only they know to where Come sit awhile and you too can give your mind and body a rest |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I feel as if I'm sitting beside you ME, as I read this nicely flowed poem....very nice writing!! Nathan |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Nate, thank you and there is lots of room! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A lovely entrance to spring... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a restful read. May I sit down beside you for a while and share? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Lady In White, thank you Interloper, you are most welcome. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I wanna come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved this my mom...a very relaxing write~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . on the shores of Lake Michigan. . . one of my favorite places to be. . . thank you ME. . .love this one!!! ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Butterflies, my kid, we will find it and go there and just listen to the quiet! SOON Sven, Lake Michigan or any place you want it to be. I hope everyone has such a place. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes... spring does give us that healing peace of renewal... serene and wise inspire here M.E. well done!! It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i want to so badly but thanks for the invite i guess only your poem can take me there. yuh yuh |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Janet Marie, thank you. Hope it last long enough to really enjoy. wayoutwalt,I'll bet if you close your eyes and think real hard, you will find that place. And you are welcome at mine. |
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