Open Poetry #13 |
Freedom in Friendship |
DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Freedom in Friendship I feel the desire to be involved Almost as strong as my hunger Or thirst for your devotion Friendship comes in many layers Am I a friend to you? A jewel found in the sea Moments spent together Are not always grand My heart has no schedule No calendar does it keep It lives in the here and now Needing your trust To find its comfort zone Longing to free you of pain Finding a treasure within. [This message has been edited by DawnG (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Needing your trust To find its comfort zone Longing to free you of pain Finding a treasure within.' Excellently written, Dawn! Great friendship poem...I like this!! sp to be with you... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice portrait of friendship here, Dawn. Well said. All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Friendship does come in many layers, and the best ones are the ones that warm. Kathleen Blake |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
agreeing with everyone. truly beautiful. great poem... All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I'd like to thank you all for your replies. Up until almost a year ago now I had never known the true meaning of friendship. Now I'm living a happier life than ever surrounded by my friends. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you will always be a jewel in the sea of my heart, for you are one of the best friends I've ever had and I love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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