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The Perfect Team
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The Perfect Team |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
He makes me laugh When I am down He makes me smile When I frown He makes me relax When I am tense He makes me look Beyond the fence He makes me see The beauty within He makes respond With the biggest grin He makes me walk Through the trees He makes me sail With a breeze He makes me happy Being by his side He makes me feel No need to hide He gives me hope When days are dark He makes me realize I hit the mark He shows to me Love without strings He writes the tune To which my heart sings He gives me freedom To pursue my dream Together he and I Make the perfect team Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such a delightful read...and this put a smile on my face..think this can turn into a lovely rap song...was rapping in my mind when i was reading this in fact... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
He makes me look beyond the fence ---------------- I really enjoyed this read. The thought that there may be someone out there like this gives my heart reason to keep looking.  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and you know what's beyond that fence don;'t you! THE big field...sow those wild oats!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
And you my friend so much deserve to be a part of a perfect team...and I also think that any man should count himself lucky to be a part of you....I hear the ROAR...and I love the sound my friend...never silence it for anyone or anything now that you've found it...it's an awesome sound~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Although no team is really perfect, I think you capture our own idea of perfection here very nicely. I enjoyed this very much. Maybe I'm talking to much? LOL! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Had to come back and say, yes, it is an awesome sound! Kathleen Blake |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
faterider - I never thought of it that way!! You are right though. Thank you and happy to make you smile! Tennessee Angel - Please, keep looking. You never know what you will find. Never give up. Kathleen - Woo hoo!! The big field!! Yes, I know there is much beyond the fence once you get past it. LOL @ your reply. You always know how to make me smile. Thank you. BDC - Thank you my friend. I appreciate your words more than I can say. You are a very sweet and dear woman. The ROAR is on and it will never stop because I have learned a valuable lesson . . . true love will not silence it, it will enhance it. Very important to remember. I am happy you like it. I can hear a butterfly ROAR also. Music to my ears sweetie. You also deserve to be a part of a perfect team. ~HUGS~ Temptress - I disagree. The right team is unstoppable and can conquer any obstacle. Glad you enjoyed. Kathleen - This one's for you, baby!! ROAR!!!!!!!!!!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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