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Auguste

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-03-23 09:21 PM

He Dries Her Off

She steps from the bath,
water
running in rivulets
down
her fragrant body,
invading secret places,
then quietly
dripping
onto the
drenched mat.

He comes to dry her off,
starting by wrapping a towel
around her hair
and then taking another
as he tenderly
kisses her,
pulling her wetness
against him.

He gently
pats her back,
moving ever downward
against
supple rises and curves
as he dries
all
of the places
that have
collected moisture.

Then on his knees,
he dries each leg,
starting
at the thighs
and finishes
with her feet.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Marge Tindal

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1 posted 2001-03-23 10:49 PM

MichaelA~
Sizzling !
Sensual !
Softly inviting !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie

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2 posted 2001-03-23 11:01 PM

Hi Michael--very lovingly toweled poem, my friend...well done!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2001-03-23 11:25 PM

*sigh*.....is there any other way....done
with just the right touch of tender and
steam...excellent writing~

Auguste

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4 posted 2001-03-24 01:56 AM

Marge,
I'm so glad you got to read this one. As you can see, it's a bit different from my usual writing. It's more sensual. Hey, do me a favor and drop the "A" on Michael A. We've known each other for so long now that the "A" isn't needed, don't you think? :-) I am glad you liked this one, my friend and appreciate you stopping by for a read. Thank you.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Auguste

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By the sea

5 posted 2001-03-24 01:58 AM

Martie,
Is there any other way? Thank you.

Butterflies,
Thank you for the "excellent."

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Martie

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6 posted 2001-03-24 10:26 AM

Michael--Don't mind me as I come back to read this little gem again..

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-03-24 10:50 AM

...and I'll bet the towel had been warmed, too....

this is liking me....

Moon Dust

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8 posted 2001-03-24 11:47 AM

Very nice

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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9 posted 2001-03-24 09:12 PM

Michael, I'm glad you pointed me to this one. It's very beautiful and sensual. I like the loving images you have created with it.

Dee

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Auguste

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10 posted 2001-03-25 02:56 PM

Karilea,
Yes, the towel was also warm. :-) Thanks

Moon Dust,
Thanks for the "very nice" and for reading.

Dee,
I was hoping the love showed through as much as the sensual quality. Thanks for noticing it and for the nice words, my friend. ((((hugs))))

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

SEA

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with you

11 posted 2001-03-25 05:28 PM

If my husband toweled me off like this, I would be completely undone.........this is so sensual and yes, so loving and gentle and romantic................sigh........

SEA

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12 posted 2001-03-25 05:50 PM

Such a tender sensual moment. Why don't men do this more??????

Loved it, Auguste. Beautiful gentle flow.

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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13 posted 2001-03-25 06:01 PM

Very sensuous and romantic writing, Auguste. A beautiful moment indeed.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Suetang
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14 posted 2001-03-30 08:07 PM

Michael,
What a sensual piece of writing you have done, very seductive and beautifully written. Thank you.....Sue

Suetang

Auguste

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15 posted 2001-03-31 01:14 AM

SEA,

Completely undone? Ouch, sounds painful.

Seriously, glad you liked this one and thank you.

Just A Woman,

They don't do it more? Hmmm...

Then maybe they just ought to. Thank you.

Lone Wolf,

Thank for for the kind words and for stopping in to read this.

Sue,

I appreciate you reading this and the nice comments. Thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

suthern

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16 posted 2001-04-01 03:07 PM

Ohhhhhh.... lovely!!! A man with such sensuality in his soul is a keeper indeed! *S*

Irish Rose
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17 posted 2001-04-01 03:45 PM

All I can say is this is the most sensual poem I've read in ages.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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elizabeth anne
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18 posted 2001-04-02 10:16 PM

Mmmmmm....very nice...delicious in fact!

Elizabeth Anne

Red-uni
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19 posted 2001-04-02 10:18 PM

very nice, and sensual.
Red

JamesBowie
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20 posted 2001-04-02 10:45 PM

I have to go see my wife now....

Rosebud1229
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21 posted 2001-04-02 10:51 PM

This is so romantic, I am speechless.

Auguste

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22 posted 2001-04-03 03:45 AM

suthern,
Does that mean you're keeping me?  :-)  Thanks for reading and enjoying.

Kathleen,
The most?  Hmmm...  Guess I'll just have to write another to top this one.  :-)  Thank you.

Elizabeth,
Thanks for the "delicious."  :-)

Red-uni,
Glad you liked it and thanks. :-)

JamesBowie,
(Laughing)  I bet she'll be happy to see you.  Thanks.  :-)

Rosebud,
Speechless?
Does that mean I went too far with this one?  :-)  Thank you for liking this.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Wilfred Yeats
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23 posted 2001-04-03 03:34 PM

Clearly you're a man - I will be taking more writing lessons from - - Well done my friend - very well done

Auguste

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24 posted 2001-04-03 03:41 PM

Wilfred,

I'm flattered, sir. Thank you, sincerely. I'm pleased you liked this piece.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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25 posted 2004-05-05 03:19 AM

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