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Have You Ever ... ?
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Have You Ever ... ? ~*Marge Tindal*~  Have you ever watched a sunset cry, dripping tears across a twilight sky ? Caught in prisms of lavender light, just before she says goodnight. A mist, so light, that drifts into the night to fall as morning dew. To softly dance across the lawn, toweled again upon the dawn. Oh, I have seen a sunset cry, laying her sorrow across a night sky. Felt the dew so heavy-laden, awaiting return of morning maiden. Where upon a tear-kissed flower, sunbeams danced within dew-shower. Warmed the gentle lily's bed, lifting hearts to smile instead. Next time you watch a sunset, squint with all your might, that you may catch her teardrops, before the morn takes light. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Purple passions torn by sunset, and awe spilled a tear upon the phoenix rising. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Wow thats all I can say.. It was really moveing. ~Michell [This message has been edited by Snowdwen (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is stunningly beautiful |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Where upon a tear-kissed flower, sunbeams danced within dew-shower. Warmed the gentle lily's bed, lifting hearts to smile instead. ~* My favorite lines! *~ And though the tears fell from the sky, They made me hold my breath and sigh, For they were not tears of sadness you see, But gentle tears of love for you and for me.  Simply beautiful Marge - and the presentation had your signature! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ Beautifully inspiring reply and I thank you. Paula~ I'm real glad you enjoyed it so. Mysteria~ Awww ! To break into poetic reply is a compliment that does not escape this eye. Lovely thoughts. Thanks, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yes, i have.... and you wrote it beautifully.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very good piece. I loved the imagery in this one! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 yes, to see the purple skies shed soft rain of velvet sighs just before the thunder storms just before a love's reborn |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
WELL WRITTEN MARGE THE DESCRIPTION IS AWESOME COLORS FANTASTIC WRITE ON<> |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is breathtaking, Marge...I was swept away with the fantastic imagery! Beautiful write! (you know I've got to have this graphic, too!  )sp  to be with you... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
of the many blooms you have graced us with, this rose is truly an American Beauty... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Absolutely gorgeous... A touching write with splendid imagery... Marge, I smile at computer screen knowing that only YOU could write something so beautiful like this... A favorite of mine this is sweetie... Thank you for the cherished read my lavender friend *coco* |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow Marge, this is very beautiful....one of the most beautiful poems I've read from you...great work!! Nathan |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ I love this, it's so soft and summery....your pen is beautiful....**S Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How I hate it when you write a poem so beautiful I can't come up with a smart-aleck response...STOP THAT!!!!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Woe is me... I feel I've betrayed a friend... I'm guilty of becoming so rapt and awed by her beauty, I missed the sorrow. Ah, well... I'd always heard that life wasn't all a bed of roses for the incredibly beautiful, but I sulked in Plain Jane disbelief that dazzling loveliness ever shed tears. *G* Lovely poem, Marge... perfection in your phrases! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Outstanding use of imagery here Marge. I haven't been here in so long and all these poems show me how much all of you have grown so much more than last time I was here. It's been a while, but is still a blessing Marge, as always. Looks like I have some catching up to do. LOL J~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Thank you so much, hon. BradM~ Thank you for the nice reply. Welcome to Passions. Karilea~ Just lovely thoughts from you, my friend. Awesome graphic too ... thanks. SoaringEagle~ My heart-keeper ... I thank you so much. Love ya'  SnowPants~ I love sharing. Grab-A-Graphics-R-Us ! !  Mike~ Awwwwwww ! You sweetie, you !  Dani~ So good to see you ! ! Glad to know you enjoyed it, my friend. Nate, my friend~ Thank you so very much. GreenEyes~ Nice to share with you. Thank you. Balladeer~ LOL ! Ah, go ahead and hit me with your best shot ! SuthernGal~ Sometimes the tears make her even lovelier, eh? Thanks for a sweet reply. JFreak~ Thank you. It is good to see you back here. Good luck on 'catching up' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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