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truly...rictameter/Thank you Marina
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truly...rictameter/Thank you Marina |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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Possibly a rictameter.....thought I'd try it. Thanks to Marina for introducing me to this style. truly this man must stand alone at times sorting dirty laundry of past mistakes... a forgotten promise lost to smaller unimportant things is a crime no less brutal than the rape of a heart truly [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very profound observation, Mike. Enjoyed it.  All writing comes |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It is a great idea..............thanx and carry on |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Mike, Beautiful. And looks like it fills the bill to me from what I read of the description of this form. Panne |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Lone Wolf, Waseem & Panne.....thank you for commenting. I suppose everyone at one time or another has broken a promise either inadvertantly or by effort. Guess I was just spanking my own rear-end here. Mike [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PackRatMike~ Very nicely done - and a subtle message to boot ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thank you Marge. |
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