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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-02 03:42 PM

Three X's Three

how jealousy rears it's ugly head
when you assume, who is in whom's bed
you start the rumors that start to fly
it doesn't matter to you, who you make cry
& it doesn't matter to you if the story is true or not
just another hunk of meat to warm your pot
that green-eyed monster that you've become
is another peice that makes you numb
but remember... what you sow you shall reap
and you shall NEVER obtain the things you seek
untill you make amends three X's three
your dreams and hopes shall not fly free

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2001-04-02 03:56 PM

Very strong message here, poetically put. I hope he gets it. The message that is.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-02 05:50 PM

Powerful point and well put. Karma always has a way of sneaking up on you when you least expect it. Very wise writing!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-04-02 05:59 PM

EVERY rule...is three times three! And should there tears high priestess be...not three times three, but nine times nine and all the tears ye count are thine! Beware of judgement's finger point, for every one, You've four annoint! Blessed be.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-04-02 06:28 PM

I sure know someone I like to send this to. Well done!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-02 06:32 PM

Excellent. . .like they say. . . Karma can be a. . .

Great poem!!!

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-04-03 06:13 AM

jealously...........what a bad shade of green for anyone (including) the Irish to wear!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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