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Traces and Faces
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Traces and Faces |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Traces and faces Traces of places stare on odd faces Dance and prance on the chance of a glance They chase and they base on a fragile embrace On the slightest tweak and peek of enhance. They stir and entwine like cloths on a line Phantoms and ghosts in the back of your mind. They wine you and dine you on the past of consigned One that has stayed but can’t be aligned. And you stare and you glare at the person there You smile turns to red and you lower your head Tongued tied and bare as to what to declare. And at that moment wished you were dead. They’re momentum of moment’s derailment Important and not important as the case may be They’re emplacement of subbasement encasement. Whatever the case they are based in absent tea. So I’d declare the originals original To stop the glare of the jackass stare Although the likely hood quite marginal Haven’t I seen you before somewhere? They say nonsense is a wits preserve so I hope you enjoyed this nonsense observe? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Doesn't sound like nonsense to me..It has an odd sense about it though. I very much enjoyed this, poet sir. :supergrins: GOOD MORNING! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nonsense? - Nonsense! I think being silly is in the air right now, SY... though I must say I always enjoy the use of internal rhyme in a poem. Michael |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"Dance and prance on the chance of a glance" Oh I love that!!!! Sy, you weave words wonderfully.  Good morning!
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They wine you and dine you on the past of consigned One that has stayed but can’t be aligned. ========================= They’re momentum of moment’s derailment Important and not important as the case may be They’re emplacement of subbasement encasement. Whatever the case they are based in absent tea. So I’d declare the originals original To stop the glare of the jackass stare Although the likely hood quite marginal Haven’t I seen you before somewhere? They say nonsense is a wits preserve so I hope you enjoyed this nonsense observe? ================================= Only your "nonsense" could make so much sense. And this lil gem of your poetic crown declares you STILL the reigning king of inner rhyme divine. As well as unique vocabulary and witty, clever phrases. "They’re emplacement of subbasement encasement. Whatever the case they are based in absent tea." See what I mean  and that IS rapberry tea, right?  very cool write Sy-babes *ww* me  It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I knew by the title I would LOVE it ... and I did ! This is just wonderful - wonderful - wonderful ! I read it aloud and it is such a treat ! JTC ! (Just too cool !)  Oh, what a fun - fun piece ! *Hugs* and other nonsensical stuff ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't know about the nonsense but enjoy it I did!!!! jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Neat work!! I love all the rhyming within the line as well as at the end. Not easy to do. Nice job!! All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To say I enjoyed only tells you what you already know! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Always love your responses. *L* Jewesley, So glad you enjoyed. Lone Wolf, Thanks for the neat and nice. Sunshine, Love you too. *L* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is way too good... Excellent writing, my friend, seymour regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love the title... love the poem!!! *S* And no nonsense here, Seymour... I've been red faced from misplaced recognition, too... *S* Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Sweet comment, thank you *L* |
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