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What Time....a rhyming AM Ramble
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What Time....a rhyming AM Ramble |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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What time is it? I'm so confused. I'm passionate time, I'm love overused. What time is it? I do entreat. In passionate time, I'm Love's defeat. What time is it? Oh, sweets, do tell. On passionate time, I spin and dwell. What time is it? I do beseech. I'm passionate time, Too far out of reach. What time is it, Oh, sir, do say. In passionate time, Come dance, come play. What time is it? As I drown here, On passionate time, Love's season, I fear. What time is it? She asks, he does not know, Love's not measured by hand of clock, Timelessly, together, shall we grow? still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 04-02-2001).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What time is it - too late for me to still be up!!! Cute poem, but with some poignancy behind it as well. Indeed, love does not know time. And hey - if it's 4:30 here - it's 6:30 there! What the heck are you doing up anyway?  Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
UP?  thats what they call it, eh? Well..actually I'm down, but writing upwards because its safer that way. I've been writing and reading...writing..reading..OMG..is there anything else? Ohh..and THANK YOU! Thanks for reading this, and thanks for understanding what I was trying to say because I wasn't sure if I understood it myself, yannu? yes..I always try for poignancy because I have been told I have that effect before. Great to see you, Micheal. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's time to go back to sleep..... enjoyed your poem |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
GOOD MORNING, DOREEN!  Thanks, Sweet Lady!  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you better have gotten some sleep by now!!! wonderful. . . you're getting better at this rhyming stuff. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You sweet thing, get some zzzzzzzzzzzz Kathleen Blake |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
did you write this before or after changing the clocks for daylight savings time?  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven, Sleep? Hell, I'm writing...Thats enough to stop sleep over right? Geesh..  Who needs sleep. I can get a few hours and run on the fumes. It makes for some pretty interesting poetry so far anyways. Come to think of it, food gets in the way of my fingers grabbing my pen or punching my keyboard, so I'm on a diet. Sleep and food diet..ohh..I'm rambing..*looks around to see if anyone noticed* So, I'm glad you are enjoying the flow. Katleen, Thanks..Sweet? I dunno, I've been told, but I'm struggling more against it these days, yanno. Glad you liked it! Deer, It was after, and that was supposed to be the direction of the poem, but..who knew, right? Thats what I get for trying to block things out I suppose. *sigh* Thanks for reading. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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