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Open Poetry #13

The Us Within

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-04-01 11:48 AM

(Just a note to clarify and express agreement Meadowmuse)

The Us Within (originally "Just Friends")

To choose a word that rhymes with "must"
Suggests of course the very worst
Unless the two begin to trust
The beauty self-contained in "just".

Claire....thanks again for the discussion...and inspiration....what fun. Bob

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

1 posted 2001-04-01 03:29 PM

What fun, indeed, Bob. We "must" do this again sometime. (o:

Thanks,
Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-04-01 06:03 PM

I liked the message, although subtle.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-04-02 01:30 AM

I really like the message this sends

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-02 01:46 AM

I think I've missed something here, but still a good message. Joyce

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-05-15 09:38 AM

What Joyce lost, I believe I found...well done!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-05-16 10:29 AM

VEry nice, Bob! As long as there's trust and acts are just the friendship will not rust.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-05-16 10:32 AM

this brought a smile and to see something meadow inspired even o yuh

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