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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
‘I don’t know what to think,’ she said ‘I feel too much to feel,’ she said And if you want to know the truth again Just have to wrap your arms around the wind ‘And trust in something higher than us,’ I said ‘There’s something missing inside of me,’ she said ‘There’s too much noise to hear me,’ she said Clearness is offered, but will never be found We are one with the sky, the water, the ground ‘How much do you need to be touched?’ I said ‘Can’t pretend this ghost again,’ she said ‘Can’t let in, or even begin,’ she said With her arms folded, eyes downcast The sun was drowning in the past ‘Things gold cannot buy your soul,’ I said ‘Just another day, a minute, an hour,’ she said ‘Just hold me again like a little flower,’ she said And once more with arms around each other Trying, and praying not to smother ‘Just me and you this complete,’ I said |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh....my....wow....tongue tied.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We are one with the sky, the water, the ground ‘How much do you need to be touched?’ I said" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A LOT.......I need to be touched a lot........and all over please..........oh and warm slow hands......are a must  ok, this is so awesome........wow, love it!  SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow Sunshine yourself *L* and SEA...you had me going there for a minute, all that touch talk and stuff. Thank you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I demand a refraction! (sorry, don't know WHAT'S wrong with me today!  )I love this one, PK--my turn to be amazed! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh wow! I have only just found you poems PK and I am impressed. And on the hunt for more! Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I don’t know what to think,’ she said ‘I feel too much to feel,’ she said And if you want to know the truth again Just have to wrap your arms around the wind ‘And trust in something higher than us,’ I said ===================== Clearness is offered, but will never be found We are one with the sky, the water, the ground ‘How much do you need to be touched?’ I said ‘Can’t pretend this ghost again,’ she said ‘Can’t let in, or even begin,’ she said With her arms folded, eyes downcast The sun was drowning in the past ‘Things gold cannot buy your soul,’ I said ========================== And once more with arms around each other Trying, and praying not to smother ‘Just me and you this complete,’ I said ========================== my moth words cant do the justice that your own words can do this one ... so I will let your poetry speak for me (hard to talk when Im sighing anyway) "Just have to wrap your arms around the wind ‘And trust in something higher than us,’ I said" "Clearness is offered, but will never be found We are one with the sky, the water, the ground" "Can’t pretend this ghost again,’ she said ‘Can’t let in, or even begin,’ she said" "The sun was drowning in the past ‘Things gold cannot buy your soul,’ I said" always loved this one... and the title my PK collection grows oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BTTT |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PK, you've always been one of my favorites. . . and this is why. . . excellent my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A most interesting conversation...thank you for sharing it. |
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