Confessions of a Tortured Heart

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-04-01 06:03 AM

Confessions of a Tortured Heart

I need her more then she needs me.
That seems to create an atmosphere
of passivity.
If only these two hearts
felt the need to desire
within the same degree.
Then I would shine
as bright in her eyes
as she now shines for me.
And that would release
this burden from my heart
and tend to set me free.

Jameslee@April01,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 04-01-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-04-01 06:54 AM

I liked this very much James...

psssst replace than with then and it will be perfect... huggzzzzzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-01-2001).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-01 01:45 PM

your confession has been heard my son. . .

excellent. . .

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-04-01 03:32 PM

Thank you Wynter and Sven...I appreciate your response...James

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-04-01 04:03 PM

It's always torture when one loves more than the other... but we just keep stepping up for more. *S* Well done!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-01 06:07 PM

I hope that your plea is heard, James. A love such as yours should be returned a thousandfold to you. Wonderfully said.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-04-01 07:05 PM

Dear me...better yet..Dear you..
How I understand this. To the person in the poem I would say, Don't give up, but don't hesitate when and if something else comes beautifully your way.

To you, the author, I say this is beautiful and heartfelt. I love it.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-04-01 08:03 PM

sad

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2001-04-01 11:43 PM

You know I know...and Im always here for you sweet friend

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

9 posted 2001-04-02 05:42 AM

excellently written... my friend...

I can understand what you are going through... we are sailing the same ship... let's just keep afloat for now...

regards,
Sudhir

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