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Wearing You Warmly
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Wearing You Warmly |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Wearing You Warmly It's been a long day and I didn't realize how tired I was till now... But the bed looks so cold and the sheets still wear your scent and I see the impression of where your head laid upon the pillow ... yes, I know it was a dream but I was wondering... Could I wear you to sleep in tonight Maybe, just your lips to cushion my forehead or maybe I could wear your chest.. for my head, so my hair can fan out across your shoulder But then I was thinking, maybe I could borrow your arms ... to drape over my ... arms ... while your palm covered my breast... and took the chill away leaving ... goose bumps Could I? It's a perfect fit you know and I promise not to toss and turn Only, to sink deeper into you The bed looks so cold.. .... Could I wear you? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well, why not? Such a cozy idea, and so kindly requested . . . I like this, Snow, nicely done. /:-}== |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Wow! Snow. This was really nice. great idea- Wish I had thought of it - and good execution in your style and words. In reading it a 3rd time I can not single out any one phrase I like better than the rest - they were all good. Thanks for this. I would love to come back and read it again...if I can find it...I will. Panne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Snow I like this pooem a lot...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I could not pick a verse or phrase I liked more than another..although a cushioning kiss is always wonderful...loved it Snow..as always, you touch the inside of a heart ~Wynter |
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