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Open Poetry #13

Ever hear voices

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-03-31 10:29 PM

Silence mad man I am trying to write
then get on with it, I'm hungry
I don't care, this is your fault anyway
you opened the door, I just walked in
Just be quiet so I can concentrate
I've seen your writing, you need help
I write just fine
I mean a psychiatrist
Shut up, just shut the hell up
see.....

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-31 10:45 PM

I think this would have made the point without the profanity.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2001-03-31 10:55 PM

OK irish, I apologize.

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

3 posted 2001-03-31 11:14 PM

wait- what was profane in my poem?

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