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Learning To Know You
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Learning To Know You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“LEARNING TO KNOW YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ The tenderness of a poem, with many words about you, trying to say how I feel, and about things we would do… I write about your touch, gentle and loving, with bliss, and wanting to return it to you, and to seal it with a kiss… Your words true and deep, with so very much meaning, ones that are tender, and with whispers of loves aching… A wanting passion for you, whenever you come close, I am never satisfied, as my thoughts I can’t compose…. All of these things I didn’t know, there’s no one to blame, when you entered my heart, and made it what it became… Soft, from hardness; warm and giving, from coldness, somehow it became this way, perhaps it was you, that made it amorous… I don’t know all of the answers, but one thing I can’t argue, this was all happening to me, when I was “Learning To Know You”… ~~~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words always bring me to a smile Bill...lovely thoughts always ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 It been too long since I've read your work. This is no less beautiful than the rest, and I can relate. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I bet I know what YOU were watching not to long ago.... that, or A&E this morning!.... well done, Sir |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The title makes me think of one of my favorite songs from the King and I, "Getting to Know You." sweet piece and intresting, too. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And the learning process is a thing of magic and beauty... mending hurts and filling empty spaces. *S* Beautiful! |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Ah, wonderful Bill. Your writing is like the ocean when it's calm.
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I too was humming that King and I song in my head as I read this, this is wonderful! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love understand the depth of your heart and fill it with faith and joy forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love those last lines! |
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