Open Poetry #13 |
Healed |
Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I spill my mind upon your floor as you watch in fascination the pieces fall and you chose them one by one study them and remark on their sharp edges or bleeding colors slowly rebuilding them into proper form placed carefully together again and I walk out slowly, as not to slip and break this fragile mold of the new me "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I very much like the way this is written. Very much indeed. Thanks for the read. K |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
You sure you're not my twin? Its like you wrote from my mind, I can relate very much. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you, Severn! Poetic Knight - For your sake I hope not, cause if so, we're a mess! LOL "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There's probably good odds that at least I am. *S* |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Sometimes that is what it takes, to become a new person to yourself....... Great write Bernie A a day keeps the world 'G Bernie Slicker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It can be a friightening thing to make oneself over! Enjoyed this very much. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that's why it's always good to have something strong to hold it together. . . like friendship or love. . . or healing. . . I really like this one. . . I feel that we all can relate. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I spill my mind upon your floor as you watch in fascination the pieces fall and you chose them one by one study them and remark on their sharp edges or bleeding colors =========================== and I walk out slowly, as not to slip and break this fragile mold of the new me ====================== Oh I love this... the imagery and the superbly done employ of metaphor. this is a very cool write not just a woman ... a poet too very well done poetess. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, fantastic and intelligent write, indeed! Love this! sp to be with you... |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I'm glad that I went back a ways to find this one. Looks like we're all making ourselves over. Good poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Carefully put. Bob |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is outstanding! enjoyed much! *hugs* ~Tier |
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