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Open Poetry #13

Editorial (won't reflect the views of passions or nobody)

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 2001-03-30 04:04 PM

My poetry cannot soothe my soul
It rends my world like a wrecking ball
It brings me forth to the cusp of greatness
And shouts the words “Can this be really all?”

Maybe it’s a safe place that I can be
To bleed my heart less discreet
I want my name to go unheard
Then might my work not walk the street

Poetry is the fallacy of my existence
The foremost factor of my phantom pain
If I could live my life less secure
I’d feel that I was not so very plain

I am alone in my ignorance
My arrogance thus seeps away
And I write books of sustaining poetry
Till my shining knight comes one day

This is just in my recent experience
My namesake burns out all the faulted time
And of course this is just my point of view
Hypocritically noted with spot on end-rhyme

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-30-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-03-30 04:09 PM

"Maybe it’s a safe place that I can be
To bleed my heart less discreet"

Walt~ great writing from you

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2001-03-30 04:15 PM

Dear Walt~
Wonderful guy
You write great poetry
You amaze and delight my eyes
With words

~SEA~

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-03-30 04:19 PM

your sweet SEA thank you

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2001-03-30 04:27 PM

anything for you Walt!

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-04-01 12:12 PM

Hey Waltie!!!! Missed ya much! And here I come back and find ya writing Editorials! You never cease to amaze me my friend? BTT for you with HUGS.

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

6 posted 2001-04-01 12:20 PM

interesting read. Maybe you are just"keeping it real" or something like that. But I have never found your writing to be in need.

Nan

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7 posted 2001-04-01 10:28 AM

Hey walt... one thing we can always say about you... You're "real" for sure...

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