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the longing of my feet
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the longing of my feet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How translucent is the tear? A rainbow's echo--prismed fears, magnified reflections all- casting paint on charcoal wall. Why sadness to make beauty sing? Why madness in these thoughts of sting? Why a memory unfold, in one night, I grow wrinkles, old? What there is left of me, inept, secures the tear that's left unwept. A heaving of the soul's beguine, I cannot start. I will not cease. Storms are born of woman's woe... an avalanche of memory's snow, and every mile I've yet to go is but the longing of my feet. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
serenity, So sad this is and so very well written. Hugs to you this early morning. ((((you)))) Michael Proust- |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow don't you ever sleep... I cannot start. I will not cease. (i like this line) Sounds like you have been talking to me... Every tear should be counted and look'd at. Bernie A  a day keeps the world 'G.Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-23-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Serenity.......you have wonderful depth. "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
You are deeper than deepest depths. What an adventure to explore your thoughts... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, I love this one!!! Did I ever tell you to SUBMIT!!!!!!!! LOL |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Love it, don't listen to P.Devine, never submit! I'm teasing, I knew what she meant; it's excellent.!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Michael...thanks again, you really are one gracious poet, yanno? bernie? Um, it does occur to me, that if you are noticing MY insomnia, then you are not sleeping much yourself!   Thanks for reading!Just a Woman? Is there something else I can call you? J.a.W. reminds me of sharks and somehow I don't think that suits you-- thanks for reading---and, love your signature quote! PK---laughing here, yes, adventurous is a very diplomatic way of putting that! Thank you!Oh Sharon!  People are gonna start to talk!  Thank you, my friend! Kath, don't worry, I just oiled my whip last night! thanks for reading!and thanks to all! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl you are justAWESOME |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darn it, I thought I shut the light OFF in the bathroom's mirror.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How translucent is the tear? A rainbow's echo--prismed fears, magnified reflections all- casting paint on charcoal wall. ======================== Why a memory unfold, in one night, I grow wrinkles, old? What there is left of me, inept, secures the tear that's left unwept. A heaving of the soul's beguine, I cannot start. I will not cease. Storms are born of woman's woe... an avalanche of memory's snow, and every mile I've yet to go is but the longing of my feet. ================================ you get more amazing with every write..... "What there is left of me, inept, secures the tear that's left unwept. A heaving of the soul's beguine, I cannot start. I will not cease. Storms are born of woman's woe... an avalanche of memory's snow, and every mile I've yet to go is but the longing of my feet." damn I love the way your mind works. awesome me twin....truly!!! forget the vials baby... send me 50 gallon drums oh you speak to me in riddles |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'How translucent is the tear? A rainbow's echo--prismed fears, magnified reflections all- casting paint on charcoal wall.' Wonderfully penned lines, serenity! I love this one! sp  to be with you... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Sista, I love this an excellent write m'dear. Maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't know what I've done above, hmmm can't seem to edit. I do apologise . again excellent writing dear. I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula, Sunshine, JM, snowpants and my Sista! My humble apologies for such a belated thank you (As ya'll probably know by now, I tend to be a bit oblivious) sigh...Please don't mistake it for ingratitude! You've my most sincere appreciation. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers. Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee  |
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