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Seduction (repost) |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Gleaming bright That sparkle in his eye Enticing me Drawing me inward. The darkness of his iris Flows over me Seduces me Weakens my will. Yielding to his power I collapse I am fixed Forever in his arms. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The darkness of his iris Flows over me Seduces me Weakens my will. ================= HEY YOU  welcome back!!! so nice to see your name and lovely smile here today. this is a very cool and sensual write... like the way you put the impact words in italics to accentuate them. well done poetess. hope you can stay awhile. jm oh you speak to me in riddles |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Lovely poetic seduction. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks. This poem was for a friend, Scott, who really enjoyed it. (Sorry Randy!) Thanks for reading! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Beautifully written |
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