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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As If I walked the floors of my mind last night, wondering when this whirl I am in will cease to entertain me, harboring me from the evil that awaits... I punished myself today, finishing off the painfulness from yesterday, swallowing it's thickness till I choked and spit out what remained... As if that wasn't enough, I was pricked by tomorrow's trys bleeding clear, all that pulsed within me, my life line of hope being drained, leaving me clinging... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh my Wynter...such pain written here...you ok sweetie? |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
wow...every line is so cool...I would really like to know what inspired this one. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Wynter........this is excellent writing. Powerful ending. "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Wow, you know you can always talk to me, anytime it just gets to be too much- I am only a click away, I never have that much going on that I can't help a friend. Kathleen Blake |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all.. Paula (I am ok at this moment, huggss for caring), Poetic Knight, Just A Woman, Kathleen .. hmmmm PK...you must not have been reading me all along, *w..I forgive you, I am one of those who writes my real life pretty much as a diary, one for my own peace of mind and two, to keep track of the events in my life, just in case. I am no different, I have noticed from others, as I have read their comments...but after 30 years..the constant ups and downs that are occuring now when being left on my own to fight everything, solve everything, can bring me down at times...and I have developed some slight phobias (slight to me) and am working on getting over them myself..so I have to keep trying harder, so as not to lose everything...some would say to stop worrying about my home..and move on...but my home is everything to me, I have put over 21 years of my life into it and it is 100 years old this month... and I am trying hard to hold onto it...so that is my main struggle, plus jobs are becoming hard to come by as the economy is faltering...just my luck..I was born in a recession, married in a recession, bought a house in a recession...and now probably will divorce in one... ~~sighing..this is more than I wanted to repeat...but you have no email on here..*s ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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