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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-29 11:22 PM

A Heart Upon My Cheek

Each time he comes into my view
My smile becomes an I love You.
It's written on my face you see,
Those words that ink invisibly.

Each time my eyes close into night
My dreams take off into their flight.
My heart rests there between the feel
Of satin sheet and cheek of real.

Each moment viewed behind closed sight
Brings into view in shadows might,
A heart upon a cheek in place,
For waiting lips, a kiss to grace.

As silent words in mind I file,
I share my heart, my love, in smile.

~Wynter

...thank you Balladeer for being inspiring tonight

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-29 11:24 PM

Ah Wynter....he will LOVE it....a perfect response!

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-03-29 11:27 PM

Wynter....This must be why we blush. Very special. Bob

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-03-29 11:57 PM

Wynter~
A lovely inspirational write ....
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-03-30 12:13 PM

isn't it nice when we are inspired by another poet, it's what makes Passions the cherry instead the pit, and what did I just say, it's after midnight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

5 posted 2001-03-30 12:32 PM

Wynter, It is very hard to write a piece in couplets and you did a good job with this. Great theme too. WTG. Panne

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-03-30 06:25 AM

Sunshine
I had a depressing day 'til I read his poem and thought this has good prospects for a poem of my own

RMW
thank you Bob..blushing comes easy to me as does smiling

Marge
Balladeer can inspire easily, I loved the line about the heart tattooed on the cheek..he is very creative. Thank you for responding Marge. huggzz

Irish Rose
Oh I love to be inspired, it saves me from thinking hard and right now my brain is very tired...and you need to go to bed too and get more rest... huggzzz

Panne415
I have no problem rhyming and I appreciate your kind response ... I usually have to fight myself not to rhyme in couplets...

and give credit to Balladeer for the theme..it was his...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-30-2001).]

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-03-30 10:35 AM

I haven't read Balladeer's inspiring poem yet... *S* ... But it's undoubtedly great to have inspired this lovely poem. Well done!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-04-01 06:46 AM

Thank you Suthern, it was just an inspiration that I sometimes get from reading another's poem

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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