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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Incredibly Blue ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Incredibly blue ... that's me without you What's a girl s'posed to do when she feels so incredibly blue ? Envious green ... no doubt to be seen Where are the dreams when a girl feels so enviously green ? Desire crimson red ... going on in my head Should I forget you instead not feeling this blush of crimson red ? Deep purple thought in nighttime is caught I know that I ought to get over you without this shaded hue that keeps me feeling so incredibly blue ... ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Even you now Marge? hope this was just a made up story- if not- all the best to your big big heart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBowie~ P romise of phrase O n turn of quill E ver enchanted M uses write what they will !  Thanks for the morning read, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Truth or not it does not matter. Beautifully written with your colorful pen. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ as always, amazing....  ( when I grow up, I want to be just like you ) SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your poetic box of crayons is most lovely Margie girl ... a bittersweet rainbow reflection here my dear  way cool ... you are  groovy too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose I am incredibly blue myself...and chocolate...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, It's you... just incredibly you! regards, sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
not only beautiful to read - but fun too - |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Very nicely done Marge. Let me pass you my Yellow crayon..Hoping to give you some Sunshine :-) -------------- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops, heard Kitkat - Sunshine here....dispelling all those blue days, but hey, on the other hand, I think I'll just take away your box of crayons! You're just so darn colorful! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Penned so beautifully as always very much liked this one, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Do not, repeat NOT take Marge's crayons from her... for we'd all lose so much beauty! *S* Just hand over the yellows and oranges and pinks and give her a lovely sunrise. *S* Marge: You can even make aching loneliness and missing miserably beautiful, gal.... Well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Inot2B~ Thank you so very much. SEA~ Awwwww ! Such a lovely thing to say - The secret is in not growing up ! Shhhhhhhh ! JamesMichael~ Yum ! Sounds scrumptious ! Sudhir~ WOW ... that's a pretty neat thing to say ! You're pretty gosh-darned incredible yourself ! Wilfred~ Pleased to share beauty and joy with you anytime. KitKat~ Look at you ... a regular magician - here come the . . . . Sunshine~ Oh, no ... not my crayons ! Pretty please ... not my crayons ! Tee-Hee ! Cerenity~ Thank you bunches, sweetie. Suthern~ Yellow is sooooooo mellow And I suppose I would be in the pink With a glowing orange sunrise ! You ALL are the greatest ! No doubt about it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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