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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-05-18 09:38 PM



Dash and dart
Zip and flit
Hum wingers

Tiny wings flutter
Whirling helicopter speed
Beaks sip nectar

Instantaneous
A seconds worth of sugar
For the present needs
Momentary Requirements
Returning visit next flight



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-18 10:30 PM


My father encouraged hummingbirds...and if they were more abundant in my area...I would too...

well done!

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2 posted 2001-05-19 03:47 AM


SongBird~
Adorable - Adorable - Adorable ! ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-05-19 08:26 AM


I agree with all of the above!

Wonderful!

~Tier

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