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Youth
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Youth |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Youth a pleasurable place with I dare you’s little boys running barefoot through mud puddles chasing girls with frogs pulling off rain hats drinking the droplets where fun is fun life is laughs where we never think about pain and hurting rainbows come always friends are forever clothes are confining life is so sweet grass is for rolling not mowing where it’s never bad to cry and smiles are honest and don’t hurt a bit "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'where fun is fun life is laughs where we never think about pain and hurting rainbows come always friends are forever' This is fantastic, m'friend...I absolutely love this...excellent write! sp  to be with you... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What an honest, refreshing piece of poetry. Kathleen Blake |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
There wasn't a line of this that I didn't love and remember...thanks for this! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
and wasn't it fun in that morning sun? thanks for the smiles this brought! S Arthur |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I enjoyed this poem, excellent. I see youth and hope in it! AP |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This would be my idea of the perfect childhood... enjoyed! ~Tier |
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