Open Poetry #13 |
Roots |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I hold **** Redone~ Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
A very worthwhile poem to read. We live a life of change. This must be reckoned with and sometimes even enjoyed. Great job. Roger TPP |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This has special meaning for me. Thank you for this one. Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ W O W ! 'My soul like water, in unfinished thought' This is just so well written. Enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, This one really gave me pause to think and wonder at my own life. Thank you for this one, my friend. (((hugs))) Michael Proust- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this would definitely appear to be a finished thought. . . rooted in the center of your heart. . . excellent Lauren. . . every day, you amaze me more and more. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wonder why the winds can change construction, why do they always change?, always construct? sometimes, all the time, maybe just like Different trees, different limbs, Different roots, different branches, Reaching out, reaching above My head, I breathe in the shadows, breathe in the mysteries, breathe in my mind, let it run beneath, let it run through, let it run over My soul like water, in unfinished thought =================================== let the wind blow ... let the water flow let the love show ... let the light in you glow In the light we heal and grow ... you're wiser than you'll ever know jm tis never easy being a moth, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved your poem but the circular thinking will only keep that person in a constant state of confusion, and never get to the root of the problem, which is lack of understanding and communication (as usual that is always what it is it seems). Great job on this one! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
lovely poem i enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thanks for all the kind replies and comments...it is appreciated much... love to all Greeneyes~ |
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