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Open Poetry #13

But He Loved The Wind

joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

0 posted 2001-05-18 12:09 PM

I loved the way he arose
To meet the morning.
So beautiful he was and
Dazzling in my bed.
I loved the way he shared
His dreams and ideas.

Then one day,
There came a
Strong wind and it
Blew upon him.

I held him, but
I could not hold him.
I loved him,

But he loved the wind.

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-05-18 12:11 PM

I do like the way this was done, and the concept was wonderful!

I would see some more of this, please!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-05-18 12:35 PM

Well done. Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-05-18 12:39 PM

I loved the way he arose
To meet the morning.
So beautiful he was and
Dazzling in my bed.
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very nice expression of admiration
welcome to poetry land, nice to have you here.
take care
jm

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-18 01:16 PM

this is excellent. . .

I really liked the way that you used the wind here. . . it made me think. . .

great job!!

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