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Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-17 04:17 PM



I whispered again
while my mind cried out to you
oh, please, never stop

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-17 04:18 PM


everyone's whispering today, I enjoyed this, but wanted more, I must be desperate for conversation!!!  don't mind me, I'm in a silly mood!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-05-17 07:43 PM




I whispered again
while my mind cried out to you
oh, please, never stop


Words entered my heart
pierced my soul, eyes seeking yours,
forever, to dwell


~Wynter...couldn't resist..these small temptations



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-17-2001).]

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada
3 posted 2001-05-17 07:49 PM


i whisperd again
while my mind cried out to you
oh, please, never stop,
writing your poetry!!
becoz you rock!  

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada
4 posted 2001-05-17 07:49 PM


i whisperd again
while my mind cried out to you
oh, please, never stop,
writing your poetry!!
becoz you rock!  

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with you
5 posted 2001-05-17 07:52 PM


I promise not to...
whisper a little closer
while you hold me close



* beautiful Interloper*
great to see you back

~SEA

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6 posted 2001-05-18 10:52 AM


whispering intent
a wish, for cause, lovesome spent
intense whisperings

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2001-05-18 11:15 AM


Whispers on the wind
Float gently to midnitesun
Shout Please Do Not Stop

I really like your whisper.
New member,Midnitesun

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2001-05-18 11:44 AM


Interloper,
Enjoyed.

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