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Trivial Thoughts- Cinquain
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Trivial Thoughts- Cinquain |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Trivial Thoughts Who knows Why love once chose The one who now mocks bliss With vile that turned a warm heart From you Marina March 28/2001 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
the title is so misleading--- this is very thoughtful and well done--- makes a wonderful statement Jamie |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very relative write...it's nice....I like it.  Nathan |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marina~ I like this style, seems there is a lot that can be said with very few words.....well done! SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
these thoughts are definitely not trivial. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Terribly sad, terribly! Oh, did you mean chose or chooses? choose doesn't fit the tense. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jamie, thank you. I personally like the title the best at of the whole poem. Nate, thanks very much. Sea, thank you. It is truly amazing the message you can put acroos isn't it. Sven, thank you. Vas, thanks for the correction and for stopping by. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
not trivial..in fact, this is thought-provoking...made me pause for a while |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
made me think and I love a Cinquain |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yipe...bit me awake |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing trivial about this at all... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Faterider, thank you very much. You seem to be quite a Cinquian lover! Kathleen, they are definitely fun to write! Wayoutwalt, awake now are we? Thanks for dropping by. Sunshine, thanks so much. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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